Dear Hiring Guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides, I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across the job posting for the summer custodian position and I am writing to express my interest in applying. I believe I would be an excellent fit for this role due to my enthusiasm for amusement parks, my availability during the summer months, and my positive and approachable demeanor. I am confident that I can excel in this position as it appears to be well-suited to my abilities. Moreover, I am motivated to obtain employment in order to save money towards the purchase of a new gaming system. I would be grateful for the opportunity to further discuss my qualifications for this position. Thank you for considering my application and I look forward to your response.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job posting online and I am writing to express my interest in the summer custodian position. I believe I would be a strong fit for this role due to my genuine passion for amusement parks, availability during the summer months, and my enthusiastic and upbeat personality. Although I understand that the job may appear straightforward, I am confident in my abilities to excel in the role. Furthermore, I am driven to save money for a new gaming system, making this opportunity even more appealing to me. I have attached my resume for your review and consideration.
Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job opening for a summer custodian on the Internet and would like to express my interest in applying. I believe I possess the necessary qualities and skills to excel in this role. Given my passion for amusement parks, availability during the summer months, and my optimistic and enthusiastic personality, I am confident that I can contribute to your team. Additionally, I am motivated to work and save money towards purchasing a new gaming system. I have attached my resume for your consideration and look forward to hearing from you regarding the next steps.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener