Dear Hiring Guy, I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides, I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email. Sincerely, Kurt Gardener
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
Dear Hiring Manager,
I came across your job listing on the Internet and I am highly interested in applying for the position of summer custodian. I believe I would be an excellent fit for this role due to my passion for amusement parks, my availability during the summer months, and my positive and energetic personality. Although I understand that the job may seem straightforward, I am committed to carrying out all responsibilities with utmost professionalism. Moreover, I am motivated to work in order to save funds for a new gaming console. I have attached my resume for your review. Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I am writing to express my interest in the summer custodian position at your amusement park, as advertised on the Internet. Given my passion for amusement parks and my availability during the summer, I believe I would excel in this role. I possess a cheerful and enthusiastic demeanor, attributes that I believe would contribute greatly to creating a positive experience for park visitors. Moreover, I am motivated to work in order to save funds for the acquisition of a new game system. I have attached my resume for your review and would sincerely appreciate the opportunity to discuss further details at your convenience.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I came across your job posting on the Internet and I am writing to express my interest in the position of summer custodian. Given my love for amusement parks, availability during the summer, and my enthusiastic and positive nature, I believe that I would be an excellent fit for this role. I am confident in my ability to handle the assigned tasks as they seem manageable. Moreover, I am eager to work and save up for a new game system. Attached is my resume for your review. I would greatly appreciate it if you could inform me of the next steps.
Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener