Use the letter to complete the activity.
Dear Hiring Guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides, I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
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Dear Hiring Manager,
I came across your job posting on the Internet and I would like to express my interest in applying for the position of summer custodian. I believe I would excel in this role due to my admiration for amusement parks, the availability of my summer schedule, and my positive and enthusiastic nature. I am fully confident that I can handle the responsibilities of the job effortlessly. Furthermore, I am motivated to earn an income in order to save up for a new gaming system. Kindly inform me when you are prepared for me to commence my duties. Please find attached my resume for your review.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I came across your job opportunity on the Internet, and I am writing to express my interest in applying for the position of a summer custodian. I believe I possess the necessary qualities to excel in this role as I have a genuine passion for amusement parks, ample availability during the summer months, and a naturally cheerful and enthusiastic demeanor. Moreover, the job requirements appear straightforward, making me confident in my ability to fulfill them efficiently. Furthermore, I am motivated to earn additional income towards my goal of saving up for a new gaming system. I have attached my resume for your perusal and kindly request your consideration for this position.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job opening on the Internet and I am writing to express my interest in applying for the position of summer custodian. I believe that my passion for amusement parks, my availability during the summer due to the absence of school commitments, and my enthusiastic and positive personality make me well-suited for this role. I am confident that this job would not only be manageable but also provide me with the opportunity to save up for a new gaming system. Please let me know when a convenient time for me to commence work would be. Enclosed within this email, you will find my attached resume.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener