Dear hiring guy,
I saw your job on the Internet and I’d like to apply. I’d make a great summer custodian because I love amusement parks. I don’t have school in the summer and I’m a really fun happy guy. The job sounds really easy so I’m sure I’ll be fine besides, I’d like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you’re ready for me to start work. I’ve included my résumé with this email. Sincerely, Kurt Gardner.
In five sentences, rewrite Kurtz cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job advertisement online and I am eager to submit my application. I believe I would be an excellent fit for the position of summer custodian due to my enthusiasm for amusement parks and my availability during the summer months. With no school commitments, I possess the flexibility necessary to commit to this role. I understand that the responsibilities associated with this position may be straightforward, and I am confident in my ability to succeed in the role. Moreover, the potential to earn income for acquiring a new gaming console greatly motivates me. I have attached my résumé for your reference. Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to the opportunity to contribute to your team.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardner
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job posting on the Internet and I am writing to express my interest in applying for the position. I believe I would be an excellent candidate for the role of a summer custodian due to my passion for amusement parks and my availability during the summer months when I do not have any academic commitments. Furthermore, I possess a positive and enthusiastic demeanor that would contribute to a pleasant working atmosphere. While the job may appear to be straightforward, I am confident in my ability to perform the required tasks effectively. Additionally, I am motivated to earn money in order to save up for a new gaming system. I have attached my résumé for your perusal. Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardner
Dear [Hiring Manager's Name],
I recently came across your job posting for a summer custodian position and I am writing to express my interest in applying. I believe that I would be an excellent fit for this role given my enthusiasm for amusement parks and my availability during the summer months due to the absence of school obligations. I am a highly motivated individual with a positive and outgoing personality, which I believe would contribute to creating a pleasant experience for park visitors. Additionally, I am driven by the goal of saving money to purchase a new gaming system, and I am confident that this job would enable me to achieve that objective. Please find attached my résumé for your review. Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardner