Use the letter to complete the activity.
Dear Hiring Guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides, I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely,
Joe Jones
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Joe's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation
Dear Hiring Manager,
Upon browsing your job listing on the Internet, I respectfully submit my application for the summer custodian position. My genuine fondness for amusement parks, coupled with the availability of my unrestricted time during the summer months, makes me an ideal fit for this role. Additionally, my enthusiastic and cheerful disposition further enhances my suitability for the position. Recognizing the relatively straightforward nature of the job, I am confident in my ability to excel. Moreover, I am motivated to earn income with the objective of saving up for a new gaming system. Kindly inform me of your preferred commencement date. Enclosed herewith is my resume for your perusal.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Joe Jones
What's another word for browsing
Another word for browsing could be "perusing" or "scanning".
Can you reword this please
Recognizing the relatively straightforward nature of the job, I am confident in my ability to excel.
Acknowledging the inherently uncomplicated nature of the role, I possess unwavering confidence in my aptitude to surpass expectations.
Can you reword this please like an 8th grader
Kindly inform me of your preferred commencement date. Enclosed herewith is my resume for your perusal.
Please let me know when you want me to start. I've attached my resume for you to check out.
Can you reword that like an eighth grade with formal language appropriate
I kindly request that you inform me of your preferred start date for the position. I have enclosed my resume herewith for your thorough examination.
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job listing online and I am writing to express my interest in the summer custodian position. I believe I would be a strong fit for this role due to my genuine passion for amusement parks, my availability during the summer months, and my enthusiastic and positive demeanor. Having thoroughly reviewed the job requirements, I am confident in my ability to fulfill the responsibilities with ease. Additionally, I am eager to create savings for a new gaming system. Please inform me of your desired start date at your earliest convenience. Enclosed with this message, you will find my resume for your review.
Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Joe Jones