Use a letter to complete the activity. Dear hiring guy, I saw your job on the internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides, I'd like to earn some money to save it for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email. Sincerely, Joe Jones
In 3 to 5 sentences rewrite Joe's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across the job vacancy you posted online, and I would like to express my interest in applying for the position. I believe I would be a strong fit for the role of summer custodian at your amusement park for several reasons. Firstly, I have a genuine passion for amusement parks, which would undoubtedly enhance my performance on the job. Moreover, as I do not have any academic commitments during the summer months, I can fully dedicate myself to the responsibilities of the position. I am a cheerful individual, known for my positive demeanor, which would contribute to creating a pleasant atmosphere for both staff and park visitors. Given the straightforward nature of the job description, I am confident in my ability to excel in this role. Additionally, I aspire to accumulate earnings to invest in a new gaming system. I have attached my resume for your review and would greatly appreciate it if you could inform me of the next steps in the hiring process.
Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Joe Jones