Use the letter to complete the activity.
Dear Hiring Guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides. I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job posting on the Internet and I am writing to express my interest in the position. I believe that I would be well-suited for the role of a summer custodian based on my genuine passion for amusement parks, my availability during the summer months, and my positive and enthusiastic nature. I am confident in my ability to excel in this position as it appears to be straightforward. Additionally, I am motivated to earn income towards the purchase of a new gaming system. I have enclosed my resume for your review. Please let me know when you would like me to commence work.
Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job posting on the Internet and would like to express my interest in applying for the position. I believe I would be an excellent candidate for the role of summer custodian as I possess a passion for amusement parks, have ample availability during the summer months, and possess a positive and energetic demeanor. Considering the nature of the job, I am confident in my ability to perform the required tasks effectively. In addition, I am motivated to earn income with the intention of saving up for a new gaming system. Kindly inform me of your readiness for my employment. Attached herewith is my resume for your reference.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I have come across your job listing on the Internet and I wish to express my interest in applying for the position. I believe I would be well-suited for the role of a summer custodian due to my affinity for amusement parks, my availability during the summer months, and my amiable and enthusiastic demeanor. Moreover, I find the responsibilities of the job to be straightforward and I am confident in my ability to excel. Additionally, I am keen on earning a financial means to save for a new gaming console. Kindly inform me of the commencement date at your earliest convenience. Please find enclosed my resume for your reference.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener