Use the letter to complete the activity.
Dear Hiring Guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides, I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for nje to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely.
Kurt Gardener
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I recently came across your job posting online and I am writing to express my interest in the summer custodian position. I believe that I would excel in this role due to my genuine fondness for amusement parks, my availability during the summer months, and my enthusiastic and positive disposition. I am confident that I will meet the requirements of the job, as it appears to be relatively straightforward. Furthermore, I am motivated to earn money in order to save for a new gaming system. Kindly inform me of the timeline for when I may commence my duties. Please find attached my resume for your review.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I came across your job posting on the Internet and I am writing to express my interest in applying for the position of summer custodian. Considering my fondness for amusement parks, availability during the summer months, and my upbeat and engaging personality, I believe I would be an ideal fit for this role. The job responsibilities appear to be straightforward, and I am confident in my ability to excel. Additionally, I aspire to save funds towards acquiring a new gaming system. Kindly inform me of the starting date at your convenience. Enclosed within this email, you will find my attached resume.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I came across your job listing online and I am writing to express my interest in applying. I believe I would be a fitting candidate for the summer custodian position at your amusement park due to my enthusiasm for such establishments, my availability during the summer months, and my amiable disposition. I am confident in my ability to excel in this role, as it appears straightforward. Furthermore, I am motivated to earn income to accumulate savings for a new gaming system. Kindly inform me when you are prepared for me to commence employment. Please find my attached resume for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener