Selena, Mike and Tony, each have an essay returned by the teacher with a request for edit Selena’s essay as a return because she use the same words over and over again. Mike’s is returned because he often use the wrong part of speech when he tried to use more interesting vocabulary. Tony’s essay is returned because she use words with definitions that did not match her attended meaning.

Selena, Mike, and Tony each had their essays returned by the teacher with requests for edits. Selena's essay was returned because she had used the same words repeatedly throughout her essay. Mike's essay was returned because he frequently used the wrong part of speech when attempting to incorporate more interesting vocabulary. Lastly, Tony's essay was returned because she used words with definitions that did not align with her intended meaning.