Use the letter to complete the activity.
Dear Hiring Guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides, I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
Dear Hiring Manager,
I came across your job posting online and would like to express my interest in the position of summer custodian. I believe I possess the necessary attributes to excel in this role, as I have a deep affinity for amusement parks, have availability during the summer months, and maintain a joyful and positive demeanor. The job appears to be straightforward, and I am confident in my ability to handle it competently. Moreover, my intent to secure funds for a new gaming system further motivates me to pursue this opportunity. Please inform me of your preferred commencement date. Enclosed with this email is my resume for your perusal.
Respectfully,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I am writing to express my interest in the summer custodian position that I recently came across on the Internet. I believe I would be an ideal candidate for this role as I have a genuine passion for amusement parks, and my availability during summer months would allow me to fully commit to the responsibilities of the position. Moreover, my strong work ethic and enthusiastic disposition make me well-suited for this job. In addition to gaining valuable experience, I am also motivated by the opportunity to save money towards purchasing a new gaming system. Please find attached my resume for your review. I look forward to the possibility of discussing my qualifications further at your convenience.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job posting on the Internet and I am interested in applying for the position of summer custodian. With a genuine passion for amusement parks, coupled with the availability of my summer break from school, I believe I would be an ideal candidate. Additionally, my upbeat and cheerful personality would contribute positively to the work environment. I find the responsibilities of the job to be manageable, and I am confident in my ability to fulfill them competently. Furthermore, I am eager to earn an income in order to save up for a new gaming system. Enclosed with this correspondence, you will find my updated resume for your review.
Thank you for considering my application. I await your response regarding the commencement of work.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardner