Use the letter to complete the activity.
Dear hiring guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I’d like to apply. I’d make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don’t have school in the summer, and I’m a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy so I’m sure I’ll be fine. Besides I’d like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you’re ready for me to start work. I’ve included my résumé with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt gardener
In 3 to 5 sentences, rewrite Kurtz cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job posting online and I am writing to express my interest in the summer custodian position. I believe I would be well-suited for this role due to my affinity for amusement parks, availability during the summer months, and my positive and energetic demeanor. The job responsibilities appear to be manageable and therefore, I am confident in my ability to excel. Additionally, I am eager to earn some income in order to save up for a new gaming console. Please inform me of the appropriate time for me to commence my duties. Furthermore, I have attached my résumé for your perusal.
Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Sir/Madam,
I came across the employment opportunity for a summer custodian position on the Internet, and I am writing to formally apply for the role. I believe that I would be well-suited for this position due to my genuine interest in amusement parks, my availability during the summer period, and my amiable and enthusiastic nature. The nature of the job seems straightforward, and I am confident in my ability to excel in this role. Furthermore, I am motivated to secure employment in order to accumulate savings for the purpose of acquiring a new game system. Kindly inform me of your readiness for me to commence work. Attached herewith is my résumé for your perusal.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear [Hiring Manager's Name],
I came across your job posting on the Internet and would like to express my interest in the position. As a passionate supporter of amusement parks, I believe I would be an excellent fit for the role of summer custodian. With the absence of academic commitments during this period, I am readily available to contribute my skills and knowledge to this position. Moreover, my lively disposition and enthusiasm would undoubtedly contribute to creating a positive and enjoyable environment. Furthermore, I am also motivated to apply for this job in order to accumulate funds towards the purchase of a new game system. Please inform me of the next steps, and I have attached my résumé to provide additional information about my qualifications.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener