Use the letter to complete the activity.
Dear Hiring Guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides. I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
In 3-4 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across the job opportunity for a summer custodian advertised on the Internet and I am enthusiastic about submitting my application. With a genuine passion for amusement parks, summer availability due to the absence of school commitments, and a naturally amiable and joyful demeanor, I believe I possess the qualities necessary to excel in this role. Furthermore, I am driven to seek employment in order to financially prioritize saving for a new gaming console. I have attached my resume for your review and look forward to your response regarding the commencement of work.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener