Use the letter to complete the activity.
Dear Hiring Guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides, I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
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Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job listing on the Internet and I am writing to express my interest in the position of summer custodian. I believe I would be a valuable asset to your team due to my enthusiasm for amusement parks, my availability during the summer months, and my outgoing and positive personality. I find the job requirements to be manageable and I am confident in my ability to meet your expectations. Additionally, I am motivated to earn income in order to save for a new gaming console. Please inform me of the next steps in the hiring process at your earliest convenience. Please find attached my resume for your review.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Sir/Madam,
I came across your job listing on the Internet and am writing to express my interest in applying. I believe I would be well-suited for the position of summer custodian as I am passionate about amusement parks and have the availability during the summer months. Additionally, I possess a positive and enthusiastic demeanor. I am confident that I would be able to handle the job responsibilities effectively, and my aim is to save up for a new gaming system. Please do not hesitate to reach out to me when you are ready for me to commence work. Kindly find my attached resume for your perusal.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job posting online and I am writing to express my interest in the summer custodian position. I believe that my passion for amusement parks, combined with my availability during the summer months, makes me an ideal candidate for this role. Additionally, I possess a positive and enthusiastic demeanor which would contribute to creating a vibrant and enjoyable environment for guests. The responsibilities of the job appear to be well within my capabilities, and I am motivated to earn income towards my savings for a new gaming console. I have enclosed my resume for your review.
Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss my qualifications further.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener