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In the year 2735, Loba, Lifeline, and Mad Maggie discovered Skudge at a bar on Salvo. Skudge greeted Maggie warmly, but showed little regard for Lifeline and Loba, considering them to be Syndicate scum. He refused to provide any information about Torres Silva. In a motivational act, Maggie stabbed three darts into Skudge's hand while he pleaded, "Things have changed, Mags." Maggie responded, "Oh, but I haven't changed, Skudge." When questioned about his fear of Lifeline, Skudge removed the darts and forcefully embedded them into a map behind him, stating, "This will demonstrate why..."
Following Skudge's indication, Maggie, Lifeline, and Loba arrived at the location he marked, which turned out to be a concealed facility in the desert. After activating the Spectre security system and obtaining valuable information, the three managed to escape with the assistance of Valkyrie. Unbeknownst to the others, Loba discreetly took hold of a mysterious item.
In the year 2735, Loba, Lifeline, and Mad Maggie encountered Skudge at a bar on Salvo. Skudge warmly greeted Maggie, but displayed little respect for Lifeline and Loba, viewing them as Syndicate scum. He refused to share any details about Torres Silva. As motivation, Maggie stabbed Skudge's hand with three darts, while he begged, "Things have changed, Mags." Maggie replied, "But I haven't changed, Skudge." Skudge, when questioned about his fear of Lifeline, removed the darts and forcefully embedded them into a map behind him, stating, "This will demonstrate why..."
Following Skudge's clue, Maggie, Lifeline, and Loba reached the designated location he marked, which turned out to be a secret facility in the desert. After activating the Spectre security system and gathering valuable information, the three successfully escaped with the help of Valkyrie. Unknown to the others, Loba discreetly obtained a mysterious object.
In the year 2735, Loba, Lifeline, and Mad Maggie encountered Skudge at a bar on Salvo. Skudge greeted Maggie warmly, but treated Lifeline and Loba with disdain, regarding them as members of the Syndicate. He declined to provide any information about Torres Silva. In an act meant to motivate him, Maggie inserted three darts into Skudge's hand as he pleaded, "Things have changed, Mags." Maggie retorted, "But I haven't changed, Skudge." When asked about his fear of Lifeline, Skudge removed the darts and forcefully stuck them into a map behind him, proclaiming, "This will demonstrate why..."
Following Skudge's indication, Maggie, Lifeline, and Loba arrived at the location he had marked, which turned out to be a hidden facility in the desert. They activated the Spectre security system and gathered valuable information before managing to escape with the help of Valkyrie. Unbeknownst to the others, Loba discreetly seized hold of a mysterious item.