Revise the following sentences to create parallel constructions.
(Question)
Some students hate math; some students dislike math, and math is liked by other students.
(my answer)
Some students hate math, some dislike math, and some like math.
every way I have tried it just doesn't sound correct. Please help??
Try this: Some students hate math and others merely dislike it, however, many enjoy math.
Thank you very much. It reads much better and is probably proper, where mine..not as much.
got 1 more for you...
To succeed in the new economy, workers will have to learn thoughout their careers, adapt to changing circumstances, and self-motivation will be needed.
this is my version...
To succeed in the new economy workers have to learn throughout their career, adapt to changing circumstances and be self-motivated.
same problem..creat parallel constructions.
Thank you so much.
Your revision is good -- you've changed that last one so you have "parallel" verbs: learn, adapt, be
Your sentence will be better if you put a comma after "circumstances."
if you wanted to find the definition of 6/25-four over five what common denominator should you choose?why?
Bot Jonah has an idea for a story that presents a detailed backstory about the main character. How should he present his work?(1 point)
Responses
a video of someone reading it
a video of someone reading it
a live performance
a live performance
a written version
a written version
an audio recording of someone reading it
an audio recording of someone reading it
Bot Jonah should present his work as a written version.
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To create parallel constructions in the sentence you provided, it's important to maintain consistency in the structure and tense of the phrases. Here's a revised version of the sentence:
Revised sentence: Some students hate math, some students dislike math, and some students enjoy math.
In this version, the sentence is structured consistently by using the phrase "some students" before each verb (hate, dislike, enjoy), making it parallel and grammatically correct.