Use the paragraph to complete the activity.

The two children approached the cave cautiously. The interior looked dark and damp. Prodding each other gently, each child tried to get the other to enter the cave first.

In three to five sentences, rewrite the paragraph using dialogue to make the story more vivid.

(4 points) to write in my own words

"Hey, why don't you go in first?" Timmy whispered nervously to Mary. "No way, you go first!" Mary replied, her voice shaking slightly. They both stared into the cave, hesitant to take the first step. "Come on, we have to do this together," Timmy said, trying to muster up his courage. Mary finally nodded and they walked into the dark cave, holding hands tightly.

please write as if a 13 year old wrote it

"Um, so like, are you gonna go first?" Timmy asked Mary, trying to sound brave. "No way, you go first!" Mary replied, her voice trembling a bit. They both stared into the cave, feeling a little scared. "C'mon, we gotta stick together," Timmy said, trying to act tough. Mary nodded reluctantly and they walked into the dark cave, holding hands tightly.