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Question 1 (1 point)
Which of the answer choices shows the best way to edit sentence 9?
Question 1 options:
The cooper made the wooden barrels and buckets that held tools, and flour, and ale, and fish, and much more.
The cooper made the wooden barrels; buckets that held tools, flour, ale, fish, and much more.
The Cooper made the Wooden Barrels and Buckets that held tools, four, ale, fish, and much more.
No change is needed.
Question 2 (1 point)
Using the RACER strategy, which option is the best way to restate the following question: "What is the reason for the main character's actions in the story?"
Question 2 options:
What is the reason for the main character's actions in the story?
What are the main character's actions?
What does the main character do in the story?
The reason for the main character's actions is...
Question 3 (1 point)
When you cite evidence from the text, you are using textual evidence to prove your answer.
Question 3 options:
True
False
Question 4 (1 point)
Which two sentence starters show the best way to cite evidence from the text? You can choose more than one answer.
Question 4 options:
In paragraph two, it shows that the character...
In my opinion, I think the story says...
In the text, it states that...
I don't need the text because I remember the story said...
Question 5 (1 point)
What is the best way to revise sentence 1?
Question 5 options:
Thomas tried to hide his nervousness as he and his father walked toward the shop where Thomas would begin his seven-year apprenticeship as a craftsman.
Thomas tried to hide his nervousness and his father walked toward the shop.
His father walked toward the shop where he would begin his seven-year apprenticeship.
Thomas would begin his seven-year apprenticeship, his father walked toward the shop where Thomas would begin, Thomas tried to hide his nervousness.
Question 6 (1 point)
Which sentence is written correctly?
Question 6 options:
A. Most of the airport runways in this country is concrete.
B. Most of the airport runways in this country are concrete.
C. A and B
D. None of the above.
Question 7 (1 point)
Which sentence is written correctly?
Question 7 options:
A. The fans storm onto the field.
B. The fans stormed onto the feeld.
C. The fans stormed onto the field.
D. The fans storming onto the field.
Question 8 (1 point)
Which sentence is written correctly?
Question 8 options:
A. The crowd loved the play.
B. The crowd loving the play.
C. A and B
D. None of the above.
Question 9 (1 point)
How can you correct this sentence?
We change the flat tire on the side of the road.
Question 9 options:
Replace road with the word rode.
Replace change with changed.
A and B
None of the above.
Question 10 (1 point)
How can you correct this sentence?
Does everyone have the money saved for Bills holiday gift?
Question 10 options:
Change saved to save.
Change for to four.
Change Bills to Bill's.
B and C
Question 1: The cooper made the wooden barrels and buckets that held tools, flour, ale, fish, and much more.
Question 2: The reason for the main character's actions in the story is...
Question 3: True
Question 4: In the text, it states that...
Question 5: Thomas tried to hide his nervousness as he and his father walked toward the shop where Thomas would begin his seven-year apprenticeship as a craftsman.
Question 6: B. Most of the airport runways in this country are concrete.
Question 7: C. The fans stormed onto the field.
Question 8: A. The crowd loved the play.
Question 9: Replace road with the word rode.
Question 10: Change saved to save.