Read the rough draft.

The county’s new online grade book is a wonderful parent resource. Parents can log on to check students’ daily homework assignments, test grades, and long-term project information. A few seconds of research offers parents a comprehensive update about students’ standings.

Read the counterclaim.

However, this resource needs to be used properly by parents and students.

What sentence could be added to address the counterclaim?

This online grade book has been used with great success in other counties since its release in 2005.
Without the online grade book, parents struggle to offer the necessary support for schoolwork at home.
If this resource is not used properly, parents’ involvement might inhibit students’ independence and responsibility.
The quality of long-term projects is likely to increase because parents will encourage students to plan ahead.

If this resource is not used properly, parents’ involvement might inhibit students’ independence and responsibility.

If this resource is not used properly, parents’ involvement might inhibit students’ independence and responsibility.

If this resource is not used properly, parents’ involvement might inhibit students’ independence and responsibility.