Correct the following sentence by choosing the revision that best eliminates subjective language.
Nazario's editorial will make readers want to take action.
Nazario's editorial may potentially invoke a desire for readers to take action.
Explanation:
Subjective language refers to words or phrases that convey personal opinions, emotions, or bias. In the given sentence, the phrase "will make readers want to" is subjective because it assumes that all readers will have the same response to the editorial.
To revise the sentence and eliminate subjective language, we can use more conditional or tentative language. The suggested revision, "may potentially invoke a desire for readers to," presents the idea as a possibility rather than a certainty. This acknowledges that different readers may have varying reactions to the editorial.