Read the sentence from "Initiation.”
And from that time on, initiations didn't bother Millicent at all.
Which revision of this sentence best uses direct characterization?
And from that time on, Millicent wasn't bothered by initiations.
Read the sentence from "Initiation.”
And from that time on, initiations didn't bother Millicent at all.
Which revision of this sentence best uses direct characterization?
Millicent was bold, brave, and no longer bothered by initiations.
Upon reflection, Millicent realized that initiations didn’t really bother her.
Thereafter, Millicent said yes to each initiation task without question.
Millicent’s tense posture evaporated, and a smile curled on her lips.