English

1. Our swim coach reminded us to eat a healthy meal, sleep well, and to come early
for warm-ups before the swim meet.

2. While Jenny was skiing on Saturday morning, the trail cut through the forest.

3. After a moment of panic when I couldn’t find my keys, I remembered I had left
them in the car.

4. Carly paid for her wedding dress online and then went to pick it up at
the store.

5. You can use your smartphone to access apps focused on different tasks including
the following: calculations, word definitions, social networking, and accessing email.

6. Evan sprained his ankle at the track meet last weekend; he can’t participate in
the state meet on Saturday.

7. At six years old, my father was transferred to the company’s headquarters
in Atlanta.

8. Nobody remembered to bring in their application before the deadline.

9. I delivered the package to Diane's’ house, it was accidentally delivered to my house.

10. I’m not sure which schedule to follow since it's a floating holiday not everyone will
come in.

11. Before I go to sleep, I set my alarm; I use two: a digital clock and my smartphone.

12. Roger had baked a quiche for the school potluck dinner, and I made an apple pie
for dessert.

13. We have three events to attend on Saturday: a birthday party, open house, and
a reception.

14. I need to pick up some items from the market before I bake muffins, such as, milk, eggs, and bananas.

15. Residents from all the New England states attended the ceremony next week.

Please check sentences for me! Thanks in advance!

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  1. 2, 5, 7, 9, 10, 11, 13, 14, and 15 need work. For example, someone was transferred to Atlanta when he was six years old? Others have punctuation errors. Look them all over.

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  2. 2. The trail cut through the forest while Jenny was skiing on Saturday morning.

    5. You can use your smartphone to access apps focused on different tasks; including the following: calculations, word definitions, social networking, and accessing email.

    7. When I six years old, my father was transferred to the company’s headquarters in Atlanta.

    8. Nobody remembered to bring in his application before the deadline.

    9. I delivered the package to Diane's’ house because it got delivered to my house.

    10. I’m not sure which schedule to follow since it's a floating holiday, not everyone will come in.

    11. Before I go to sleep, I set my alarm: I use two; a digital clock and my smartphone.


    13. We have three events to attend on Saturday: a birthday party, open house, and reception.

    14. I need to pick up some items from the market before I bake muffins, such as milk, eggs, and bananas.

    15. Residents from all the New England states will attend the ceremony next week.

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