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Revising Messages: Conciseness Revise the following sentences, using shorter, simpler
words.
9. The antiquated calculator is ineffectual for solving sophisticated problems

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    Look up each word at www.thesaurus.com to make sure YOU know what each word means.

    Revise the sentence using better words.

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