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Could you check these sentences for me and see if this is correct. The pronouns are in bold. Thanks so much

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    Here are some sentences about personal finance and credit cards:
    I recently spoke to my daughter about her use of credit cards.
    I told her that the balance was getting to high and that she should make more than the minimum payment each month.
    We had already had this discussion in the past, but she didn't listen and now has a large credit card debt.
    I was just trying to help, my husband and I learned the hard way about credit cards
    This conversation is getting on my nerves, she won’t listen.
    My friend said that she was never going to get a credit card because she prefers to save up and pay cash for whatever she wants.
    She said that her uncle had once been in serious debt with credit cards and she didn't want to have to go through that awful stress."

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    You'll need to list the pronouns -- bold isn't showing up.

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    pronouns are her, she, I, my

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    I recently spoke to my daughter about her use of credit cards.
    I told her that the balance was getting to<~~?? high and that she should make more than the minimum payment each month.
    We had already had this discussion in the past, but she didn't listen and now has high credit card debt.
    I was just trying to help,<~~?? my husband and I learned the hard way about credit cards<~~??
    This conversation is getting on my nerves,<~~?? she won’t listen.
    My friend said that she was never going to get a credit card because she prefers to save up and pay cash for whatever she wants.
    She said that her uncle had once been in serious debt with credit cards<~~?? and she didn't want to have to go through that awful stress.

    One other pronoun in there is "we" -- also you have some run-ons and a couple of other errors in those sentences.

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    Could you please check these and see if these are better the (pronouns) are marked like this.

    (I) recently spoke to my daughter about (her) use of credit cards.
    (She) should make more than the minimum payment each month.
    (I) was only trying to help(her).
    Sometimes,(they) have to learn the
    hard way

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    1. (my)

    2. OK

    3. OK

    4. OK

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    ty so much

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    You're very welcome. =)

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    Here is the assignnment our teacher ask us to do

    Write several sentences describing a recent interaction with family or friends about personal fiance or credit cards. Use at least five different pronouns in your sentences.


    So are these sentences ok for this assignment?


    Could you please check these and see if these are better the (pronouns) are marked like this.

    (I) recently spoke to (my) daughter about (her) use of credit cards.
    (She) should make more than the minimum payment each month.
    (I) was only trying to help(her).
    Sometimes,(they) have to learn the
    hard way

    I just want to make sure this is ok.

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    They read fine to me.

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    ok thanks so much for understanding and help.
    have a good day

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    You, too! Go get an A!!

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