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posted by Rita
Revise the folloing sentences to create parallel constructions.
(Question)
Some students hate math; some students dislike math, and math is liked by other students.
(my answer)
Some students hate math, some dislike math, and some like math.
every way I have tried it just doesn't sound correct. Please help??

GuruBlue
Try this: Some students hate math and others merely dislike it, however, many enjoy math.

Rita
Thank you very much. It reads much better and is probably proper, where mine..not as much.

Rita
got 1 more for you...
To succeed in the new economy, workers will have to learn thoughout their careers, adapt to changing circumstances, and selfmotivation will be needed.
this is my version...
To succeed in the new economy workers have to learn throughout their career, adapt to changing circumstances and be selfmotivated.
same problem..creat parallel constructions.
Thank you so much. 
Writeacher
Your revision is good  you've changed that last one so you have "parallel" verbs: learn, adapt, be
Your sentence will be better if you put a comma after "circumstances."
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