My most exalted Monarch - Your Majesty Queen Isabella,
I am writing this letter most humbly for you to consider my request for three small ships and a crew so that I may sail west and find the shortest route to the East. I promised to chaim land for Spain and bring back riches. I will present my reasons for my request.
First, it’s quicker to reach Asia by sailing west. As we know the earth is round. When I proposed to reach India by sailing west from Spain, I knew that the earth was round. I believed that sailing west would be quicker than going around Africa. I calculated the size of the earth and found that distance to Asia is shorter if you go west. I research and studied all the existing maps to prove my theory. We will be able to beat Portugal to the riches of Asia.
Furthermore, in return I will bring you back the amount you gave me and more. With the money I will bring back you’ll have the money to pay for a larger military and ships. With the military and the ships you’ll take over other countries.
I hope the reasons I have listed above will convince you to give me your support.
Your most grateful and respectful servant,
Christopher Columbus
Is there one more supporting deatil I can add for the second reason (futhermore) and what other reason I can write for my letter (assignment) for ss
when I mean another reason i mean LAST reason because I have to write THREE reason with THREE supporting deatils EACH. i did one and I'm almost done with the second reason got to write one more supporting deatil to move on on the third reason (LAST REASON).
Please help me!!! (i forgot to say that)
Your second reason is that you'll bring Queen Isabella a lot of riches, right?
Supporting details:
1. she needs the money for ships and military.
2. riches will help make Spain strong
3. riches will make Spain more powerful
yes
Furthermore, in return I will bring you back the amount you gave me and more. With the money I will bring back you’ll have the money to pay for a larger military and ships. With the military and the ships you’ll take over other countries.
I wrote
Also this will help make your country STRONG
right?
is that a good sentence for my last supporting deatil for that reason
(IGNORE THE SS7R I ONLY DID CUZZZ I FORGOT TO PUT 7R SO THAT WAY U CAN KNOW JUST DELETE IT)
OR
This will make Spain more powerful and make your country strong.
Is that good
Yes. That's good.
ok
But i need a thrid (LAST) reason with 3 supporting deatils
I just have to write THREE reason to queen isabella for why sailing west (MAYOR REASONS)
so fare i got 2 now 1 more then im done but then u have to check it.
so any other reason why he is ailing west?
i have to start with Finally,
The third reason could be God.
Columbus promised he'd convert natives to Christianity, save their souls, bring blessings to the Queen, and bring religious rewards to the priests who converted the natives.
so I write
I promised I'd covert natives to christanity. To save their souls, bring blesslings the Queen, and bring religious rewards to the priests who converted the natives.
so that's the 3 supporting deatils for it