Please check this letter if it's good and if there any grammar mistakes.
My most exalted Monarch - Your Majesty Queen Isabella,
I am writing this letter most humbly for you to consider my request for three small ships and a crew so that I may sail west and find the shortest route to the East. I promised to chaim land for Spain and bring back riches. I will present my reasons for my request.
First, it’s quicker to reach Asia by sailing west. As we know the earth is round. When I proposed to reach India by sailing west from Spain, I knew that the earth was round. I believed that sailing west would be quicker than going around Africa. I calculated the size of the earth and found that distance to Asia is shorter if you go west. I research and studied all the existing maps to prove my theory. We will be able to beat Portugal to the riches of Asia.
Furthermore, in return I will bring you back the amount you gave me and more. With the money I will bring back you’ll have the money to pay for a larger military and ships. With the military and the ships you’ll take over other countries. This will make Spain more powerful and make your country strong.
Finally, I promised I'd covert natives to Christianity. To save their souls and bring blessings the Queen. In addition, I will bring religious rewards to the priests who converted the natives.
I hope the reasons I have listed above will convince you to give me your support.
Your most grateful and respectful servant,
Christopher Columbus
Thank You!!!!
It should be good because you've used my words almost entirely. Laruen -- that's plagiarism!
In last paragraph beginning with "Finally," you have a misspelled word and a sentence fragment.
NO!
I did NOT use most of your words the other 2 i used my notes for info, AND did it as a CLASS AND a teacher today HELP ME!
YOU help me on the last paragraph becuase I couldn't think of anymore reason I tried using my not
I DID NOT PLAGIZE !!!
i MEAN I TRIES USING MY NOTES
ALSO U HELP ME ON THE LAST SUPPORTING DEATIL FOR THE 2ND PARAGRAPH!
Dear Christopher Columbus,
Thank you for sharing your letter! I will go through it and check for any grammar mistakes or areas that could be improved. Here are some suggestions:
1. The opening sentence should be revised to "My most exalted Monarch - Your Majesty Queen Isabella," as it appears that you want to address Queen Isabella with this title and respectful phrase.
2. In the second paragraph, you mentioned "I promised to chaim land for Spain." It seems like there might be a typo in this sentence. Did you mean to write "claim" instead of "chaim?"
3. In the same paragraph, "I researched and studied all the existing maps to prove my theory" would be a better construction than "I research and studied." It would be more accurate to use the past tense "researched."
4. The third paragraph seems to have a couple of run-on sentences. Instead of one long sentence, you could divide it into two or three shorter sentences. For example, "In return, I will bring back the amount you gave me and even more. With the money, you'll have the means to pay for a larger military and more ships. Consequently, Spain will become more powerful, and your country will grow stronger."
5. In the final paragraph, "I'd covert natives to Christianity" should be corrected to "I promised to convert natives to Christianity."
Overall, your letter seems well-written with just a few grammatical improvements needed. Make sure to revise those areas I pointed out, and it will be in good shape!
Good luck with your request, and I hope this explanation helps!