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I am writing to complain about the advertisement for your new game. I just played the game and then i realised that the advertisement is misleading.
You say there are big cash prizes and averyone can win it. In fact there is only one prize, so only one person can win it. You also say that the game is cheap, but funte 5 for a game is expensive, because not many people can afford it.
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you spelt everyone averyone and i don't know what funte is lol !
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I am writing to complain about the advertisement for your new game. I just played the game and then realized that the advertisement is misleading.
You claim that there are big cash prizes and everyone can win them. However, in reality, there is only one prize, so only one person can win it. Furthermore, you mention that the game is cheap, but paying $5 for a game is expensive because not many people can afford it.
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