Thank you very much.These are the last sentences of the day.
1) In photo C an Asian boy is sitting at his desk. His exercise book is open on his desk (in front of him). He holds a book in his hands and seems to be flicking (skimming , thumbing) through it.
2) He is wearing a hsia shirt with a three-color striped, button-up, woollen cardigan over it.
3) He is a geaky-looking guy and he is wearing heavy-rimmed glasses. Though he is sitting, I guess he is quiet short and slim. He has got short, dark, straight hair and dark, almond-shaped eyes.
4) He has his hair cut in a fringe. He looks (??) self-confident and happy. He looks like a university student.
5) Photo D portrays (depicts, represents?) Carla Bruni, First Lady of France.
6) She is probably walking on a catwalk as she was a former model.
1. comma after "In photo C"; no need for "in front of him" (it's obvious!); any variation works fine.
2. OK
3. "geeky" (sp); comma after "guy"; do you mean "quiet" or "quite"? There's a MAJOR difference!!
4. use "confident" not "self-confident"
5. "portrays" is best
6. OK