I need help comparing Oedipus Rex and A Raisin in the Sun. This is my outline so far. Please help. I am stuck and could use any advice. Thank you

Comparing and Contrasting Oedipus Rex and A Raisin in the Sun

The Oedipus Rex was written around 430 B. C in Athens, Greece by Sophocles. A Raisin in the Sun was written in the 1950’s in New York by Lorraine Hansberry. The two plays were written over two thousand years apart and extremely diverse cultures yet there are similarities.

I. In this essay, I will compare and contrast the two plays Oedipus Rex and A Raisin in the Sun. I will compare and contrast the themes, writing styles, and the use of literary devices and conventions.
II. Comparing and contrasting the themes of Oedipus Rex and A Raisin in the Sun
A. Compare
B. The theme of Oedipus Rex is Oedipus cannot run from his own fate. The prophecies say he will murder his father and sleep with his mother. Oedipus seems only to desire to flee his fate, but his fate continually catches up with him (SparkNotes Editors, 2002).
When Oedipus and Iocastê begin to get close to the truth of the murder of Laius they don’t want to accept the truth. Neither can face the possibility of what it would mean if the servant were wrong. This is perhaps why Iocastê feels she can tell Oedipus of the prophecy that her son would kill his father, and Oedipus can tell her about the similar prophecy given him by an oracle, and neither feels compelled to remark on the coincidence; or why Oedipus can hear the story of Iocastê binding her child’s ankles and not think of his own swollen feet (SparkNotes Editors, 2002). Oedipus is famed for his clear-sightedness and quick comprehension, but he discovers that he has been blind to the truth for many years, and then he blinds himself so as not to have to look on his own children/siblings (SparkNotes Editors, 2002). Tiresias, the blind prophet can see the future. Oedipus was left in the mountains with his ankles pinned together when we was a baby. His swollen foot symbolizes that he has been constrained since birth. His scar symbolizes that fate has marked him and he cannot run from fate. When Oedipus was younger he fled Corinth and came to a three- way crossroads where he murders Laius and his men. The crossroads are a place that choice must be made. The crossroads symbolizes his fate, choice, and his past.
In A Raisin in the Sun, every character has their dreams. The family struggles to attain their dreams throughout the play. At the end of the play they learn the house will unite them. Mama has also taught her children to have values and to dream. Walter dreams of being able to provide for his family. Mama dreams of owning a house. Ruth dreams of being in a house big enough for Travis to have his own room and a backyard to play in. Beneatha dreams of being a doctor. They fight racial discrimination when Mr. Lindner comes to their apartment and offers them a bribe not to move into the house. The play powerfully demonstrates that the way to deal with discrimination is to stand up to it and reassert one’s dignity in the face of it rather than allow it to pass unchecked (SparkNotes Editors, 2002). The Younger’s struggle socially and economically throughout the play but unite in the end to realize their dream of buying a house (SparkNotes Editors, 2002). Mama strongly believes in the importance of family and tries to teach her values to the family while trying to keep them all together. The family is put through many struggles and learns to come together and merge their dream.


III. Comparing and contrasting the writing styles of both authors
A. Compare
B. In Oedipus Rex the writing style is formal diction. The character speak intelligently and formal. The play is tragic irony because Oedipus searches for the person responsible for the plague that is destroying his city and ironically ends up hunting himself. There are many tones used in the play. Oedipus is confident, strong, and optimistic at the beginning. When he speaks to Teiresias he gets angry. He eventually calms down until he finds out his past, then he is horrified. When he sees Iocastê dead body he becomes heartbroken along with many more emotions and gouges out his eyes. This play was written from a narrator perspective except for when the characters have monologues and interact with one another. This play is a drama with many twists.
The writing style in A Raisin in the Sun is informal diction. The characters speak slang and have a casual dialogue. The play uses dramatic irony because every member wants to use the insurance money in his or her own way. The tone of the play is calm mostly throughout the play. It is told by the narrator except for when the characters have monologues and interact with one another. The play is a drama because there are many conflicts.

IV. Comparing and contrasting the uses of literary devices and conventions
A. Compare
B. In Oedipus Rex, the main characters speak monologues and the chorus chants their lines. Sophocles used characterization to portray Oedipus as the tragic hero. The tragic hero is the one that faces the most difficult challenges. Sophocles uses flash backs to help the audience or reader switch from present to the past events. One example is when Oedipus remembers what he heard from the drunken man, who told him he is not the son of Polybus.
In A Raisin in the Sun, the main characters speak monologues. Willy Harris is the man who ran off with the family’s left over insurance money. Willy never appears onstage which helps the family keep the attention. Lorraine uses characterization to give the characters life and meaning.

V. With thousands of years apart and extremely diverse cultures, Oedipus Rex and A Raisin in the Sun utilize many of the same themes, writing styles, and the use of literary devices and conventions. Due to the format with which each author was able to deliver his or her drama, focus on the use of these devices are different. In the end it takes plot, characterization, and dialog to provide the foundation of any piece of work regardless of the time in which it was written. Sophocles and Lorraine Hansberry are to be commended for their masterful structure found within their dramas.

This is not an outline; it's more like a good beginning to your rough draft.

Concentrate on sections II, III, and IV before you worry much about the introduction or conclusion.

Compare = how they are similar
Contrast = how they are different

Your paper would be easier to read if you addressed these elements in one play before addressing those same elements in the other. Here is one way to organize in this way:

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1. Write all the information about one of your topics on one page.
2. Write all the information about the other topic on another page.
3. Then put them together in this order:

1. Intro
2. All about topic A
~~~2A. detail 1
~~~2B. detail 2
~~~2C. detail 3
~~~2D. detail 4
~~~2E. detail 5
3. All about topic B
~~~3A. detail 1
~~~3B. detail 2
~~~3C. detail 3
~~~3D. detail 4
~~~3E. detail 5
4. Concl.

The number of details for each topic will vary depending on your main points. I would include comparisons (how they are similar) in the introduction and conclusion, but sections 2 and 3 and all those details will be stating and explaining how they are different.

There are two recognized patterns for writing comparison/contrast papers. One is casually referred to as "zig-zag,” but can be very confusing for the reader if you don’t use transitions effectively. The other is topic-by-topic (which is what I've outlined above) and is much easier for the reader to follow.

See http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/comparcontrast.html for further help with comparison/contrast writing.
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And here are some links to help you write a good introduction and a good conclusion. (Writing "I am going to ..." is third-grade stuff. Delete it!)

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/intros.htm

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/endings.htm

Thank you for showing me a better way to write this paper. From my understanding I only need to compare the two plays in my introduction and conclusion? How are they similiar? I am stuck on trying to compare them. Could I say one of the common themes for both plays are "you cannot fight fate." In Oedipus Rex, he ran from his fate but in the end it found him. In A Raisin in the Sun, maybe I could say it was fate that lead them to the house. I don't know. I really don't see how these two plays have any similarities.

2. All about topic A

Do I sum up the play?

2A. detail 1 Can I then state the themes?

2B. detail 2 Explain the writing styles and maybe some facts about Sophocles life.

2C. detail 3 List literary devices and conventions.

3. Sum up A Raisin in the Sun

3A. State the themes

3B. State the writing styles and give a short Bio

3C. List and explain the use of literary devices and conventions

How does this look? Thank you for all of your help.

you did a good job i don't think you need to add more to it.....

Good Luck

Your outline looks well-structured and organized. Here are some suggestions for each section to help you improve and expand your essay.

I. Introduction
- Start with a captivating opening sentence or anecdote to grab the reader's attention.
- Provide a brief overview of the two plays and their significance.
- Introduce your intention to compare and contrast the themes, writing styles, and literary devices used in both plays.

II. Comparing and Contrasting Themes
- Instead of simply stating that there are similarities in the themes, provide specific examples and evidence from each play that demonstrate these similarities.
- Explore the differences in how the themes are presented in each play and their cultural contexts.

III. Comparing and Contrasting Writing Styles
- Instead of only mentioning the diction and the use of monologues, delve deeper into the specific language choices, tone, and other stylistic elements used by the authors.
- Analyze how these writing styles contribute to the overall meaning and impact of the plays.

IV. Comparing and Contrasting Literary Devices and Conventions
- Expand on the literary devices used in each play, such as symbolism, foreshadowing, or irony, and provide specific examples from the texts.
- Explore how these devices deepen the understanding of the themes and add complexity to the characters and plot.

V. Conclusion
- Summarize the main points discussed in the essay, emphasizing the similarities and differences between the plays.
- Reflect on the significance of these similarities and differences in relation to the different time periods and cultural contexts.
- Provide a final statement that highlights the literary achievements of both authors.

Remember to use specific examples and textual evidence to support your comparisons and arguments. Additionally, make sure to proofread your essay for any grammatical or spelling errors and refine your language for clarity and conciseness. Good luck with your essay!