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please correct any grammetical errors/tense errors and explain in order to improve my writing.


Sara came to Hyderabad airport by flight. Then, she reached Begumpet by auto where she is received by john and escorted her up to the Greenvalley Apartment. After some time,John guided her to the venue, The Arcans restaurant, where the marriage function is being organized.

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  1. Sara came to Hyderabad airport by flight. Then she reached Begumpet by auto where she was received by John, who escorted her up to the Greenvalley Apartment. After some time, John guided her to the Arcans Restaurant where the wedding was going to be held.

    Read and compare carefully. Let me know if there are corrections you don't understand.

  2. Sara came to Hyderabad Airport by flight. Then, she reached Begumpet by auto; where she is received by John and escorted her up to the Greenvalley Apartment. After some time, John guided her to the venue, 'The Arcans Restaurant', where the marriage function id being organized.

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    posted by veronica
  3. Sorry, Veronica. There are still several errors in what you wrote ... and you added some new ones!

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