Grammar

I has to revise the following sentence

naomi winned, why d you leave me like this! naomi soon began to cry.naomi lucas yelled Its okay youwill be just fine

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  1. Naomi whined, "Why did you leave me like this?"
    Naomi soon began to cry.
    "Naomi," Lucas yelled, "it's okay. You will be just fine."

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    Ms. Sue
  2. Thank you very much. That should help me on my english homework.

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  3. You're welcome.

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    Ms. Sue

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