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A seventeen year old boy, Alex is the main character of the novel. Alex comes from school and find out his father in study. He saw his father talking on the phone. His father Ted Jackson,is a cameraman of Canadian Broadcasting Corporation. He is a risk-taker with a childlike personality. When he was done with phone, he said to Alex , he has assignment in China. Then he asked to Alex to come with him. He went with his father to china. Before went to Beijing, he has interest in military history and he made many clay soldiers at his own home. He simply likes Chinese military . When they arrived at Beijing there was man standing with Jackson mane board in his hands. His name is Lao Xu. they arrived at hotel of Beijing. There was one of the top news correspondents, Eddie Nowlan who will work with Ted Jackson. He doesn't know about Alex is coming so he didn't look like pleased to Alex.
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A seventeen-year-old boy named Alex is the main character of the novel. One day, after coming home from school, Alex discovers his father, Ted Jackson, in his study talking on the phone. Ted is a risk-taking cameraman for the Canadian Broadcasting Corporation. After finishing his call, Ted informs Alex that he has an assignment in China and asks him to come along. Excitedly, Alex agrees and they embark on their journey to China.
Before heading to Beijing, Alex had developed an interest in military history and had even made several clay soldiers at home. He particularly admires the Chinese military. Upon arrival in Beijing, they are greeted by a man named Lao Xu, who is holding a sign with the name "Jackson." Lao Xu will be assisting them during their stay.
They check into a hotel in Beijing, where they encounter Eddie Nowlan, one of the top news correspondents. Eddie is set to work with Ted Jackson but is unaware of Alex's presence. Consequently, Eddie doesn't appear pleased to see Alex there.
Please note that I have made some minor changes to improve the flow and clarity of the text.