Tone (How did the author feel about their topic, and how do you know? Provide examples/evidence from story)
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One of the books are FROM SCRATCH,
by Susie Castellano
The second one is
AMY’S METAPHOR,
by Elisa Oh
In "FROM SCRATCH," the author seems excited and passionate about the topic of cooking. They use descriptive language to talk about the delicious food and the joy of creating something from scratch. For example, they say, "The sizzle of the onions in the pan made my mouth water with anticipation." This shows that the author is enthusiastic about cooking.
In "AMY'S METAPHOR," the author seems reflective and thoughtful about the topic of using metaphors in writing. They use examples and explanations to help the reader understand how metaphors can enhance writing. For example, they say, "Amy's use of metaphors helped to paint a vivid picture in the reader's mind." This shows that the author is knowledgeable and appreciative of the power of metaphors in writing.
How were these stories alike? How were they different? Think not just about the content, but of the way the stories are structured, tone, character development, etc.
Both "FROM SCRATCH" and "AMY'S METAPHOR" share a similar structure in that they both focus on a specific topic (cooking and metaphors, respectively) and provide insight and information about that topic. The stories both use descriptive language to help the reader understand and visualize the subject matter, whether it be the delicious food being cooked or the importance of metaphors in writing.
However, the two stories differ in tone and focus. "FROM SCRATCH" has a more enthusiastic and expressive tone, focusing on the joy of cooking and the sensory experience of preparing food. On the other hand, "AMY'S METAPHOR" has a more reflective and informative tone, focusing on the technical aspects of using metaphors in writing and how they can enhance storytelling.
Character development is not a prominent feature in either story, as the focus is more on the subject matter itself rather than on individual characters. Both stories are more informative and educational in nature, providing insights and tips related to their respective topics.
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"FROM SCRATCH" and "AMY'S METAPHOR" are both structured around specific topics, using descriptive language to convey their respective subjects effectively. While "FROM SCRATCH" has an enthusiastic tone about cooking and sensory enjoyment, "AMY'S METAPHOR" takes a reflective approach to discussing the importance of metaphors in writing. Both stories focus on presenting information and insights on their topics, with a more educational and informative tone rather than emphasizing character development.
Write a FULL PARAGRAPH explaining which text you liked better, and why? You MUST explain why and use specific examples and evidence from the text. *THIS SHOULD BE A DETAILED PARAGRAPH of about 5-7 sentences.
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