Comparing two stories like “Red String” and “Message in the Bottle” we can say that these are somewhat similar stories, they have a rambling path as well as a bad situation that can happen to each of us. In Perov’s story we are shown that the girl is being sold due to lack of money for food and other things, but the matchmaker teaches the girl everything because throughout the story the matchmaker becomes old, the matchmaker teaches the girl all the things so that in the future Lin will also be able to accept clients, one day day an old woman comes and says that she has a son who still hasn’t been able to find a wife because in his opinion they are all the same, the grandmother’s son wanted his wife to be able to write and read and that she would walk freely. Ju Ling and Moy Yun told the old lady that they would try to find a candidate. The matchmaker said that Ling should go alone so that she could explain to the guy. When the grandmother brings Lin to his Son, they go together to the library where the grandmother’s Son understands that she is the one because she can do everything that he asks, but Lin says that this is not so and then in her head she has a fleeting thought that the Matchmaker told her “ you need to understand people not only with your ears but also with your heart,” this made Lin blush and then the story ended with a good ending. If we are talking about the second story, then there is a slightly different concept. I think that Christopher's Mother and Father were in an abusive relationship since the father beat his mother. When Chris turned 15, he decided that he was old enough to earn money and provide his mother with a good life, but there was one problem, she had a bad back, which made his life difficult but Chris did not despair and he decided to sail on a boat where he could definitely help his mother, on the way he met Blackie who said that he could help Chris if he helped him in return, for a while everything was fine, but Chris would be Blackie who said that most likely they got caught in a storm and the ship collapsed, in this passage we are told how long they go through this wreck, how they both help each other, but no one knows whether they are still alive or not. After a long time, a couple of girls were digging in the sand and found a bottle in which there was a song signed “B. Christopher”, this bottle was taken to the Poletsets police station, where they said that there was such a passenger during the shipwreck, as a result, this letter was sent to Chris’s wife (this way you can understand that he survived and he found a wife). As a result of the story, we can also say that it ended well

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Comparing two stories like “Red String” and “Message in the Bottle” we can say that these are somewhat similar stories, they have a rambling path as well as a bad situation that can happen to each of us. In Perov’s story we are shown that the girl is being sold due to lack of money for food and other things, but the matchmaker teaches the girl everything because throughout the story the matchmaker becomes old, the matchmaker teaches the girl all the things so that in the future Lin will also be able to accept clients, one day day an old woman comes and says that she has a son who still hasn’t been able to find a wife because in his opinion they are all the same, the grandmother’s son wanted his wife to be able to write and read and that she would walk freely. Ju Ling and Moy Yun told the old lady that they would try to find a candidate. The matchmaker said that Ling should go alone so that she could explain to the guy. When the grandmother brings Lin to his Son, they go together to the library where the grandmother’s Son understands that she is the one because she can do everything that he asks, but Lin says that this is not so and then in her head she has a fleeting thought that the Matchmaker told her “ you need to understand people not only with your ears but also with your heart,” this made Lin blush and then the story ended with a good ending. If we are talking about the second story, then there is a slightly different concept. I think that Christopher's Mother and Father were in an abusive relationship since the father beat his mother. When Chris turned 15, he decided that he was old enough to earn money and provide his mother with a good life, but there was one problem, she had a bad back, which made his life difficult but Chris did not despair and he decided to sail on a boat where he could definitely help his mother, on the way he met Blackie who said that he could help Chris if he helped him in return, for a while everything was fine, but Chris would be Blackie who said that most likely they got caught in a storm and the ship collapsed, in this passage we are told how long they go through this wreck, how they both help each other, but no one knows whether they are still alive or not. After a long time, a couple of girls were digging in the sand and found a bottle in which there was a song signed “B. Christopher”, this bottle was taken to the Poletsets police station, where they said that there was such a passenger during the shipwreck, as a result, this letter was sent to Chris’s wife (this way you can understand that he survived and he found a wife). As a result of the story, we can also say that it ended well

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Comparing the stories "Red String" and "Message in the Bottle," we can see some similarities in their themes of resilience and hope in the face of adversity.

In "Red String," we follow the story of Lin, a girl who is being sold by her family due to financial difficulties. With the help of a matchmaker, Lin learns valuable lessons and ultimately finds love with a man who values her for her intelligence and compassion. The story ends on a hopeful note, with Lin realizing the importance of understanding others with both her ears and her heart.

On the other hand, "Message in the Bottle" tells the tale of Chris, a young boy who sets out to earn money to provide for his mother. Despite facing challenges and danger at sea with a mysterious man named Blackie, Chris ultimately survives a shipwreck and is reunited with his family. The discovery of a message in a bottle serves as a symbol of hope and connection in the midst of uncertainty.

Both stories highlight the importance of perseverance, love, and the human connection in overcoming difficult circumstances. While the paths taken by the characters may be different, the underlying message of hope and resilience shines through in both narratives.