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“added a new Character” Characters: Captain, stellar, mark, Michael, “NEW, Cori”, carter, Kattie, Bentsen, semi a baby dragon, skittle a color changing dragon, luna a baby dragon, Cam a new baby.
The story began in a hatchery in dragon Vill where all dragons can come to peace and allows different dragons of all and any breed,
Stellar: Come on cam, don’t you want some fish bites?
Cam: Aaaa!!!
Stellar: huh! Skittles what’s wrong!?
Kattie: stellar, what happened to skittles? Oh, and stellar do you have cam?
Stellar: about skittles I’m not sure but cam no, why... is she gone?
Kattie: well, um yes and I think her power is-
Captain: ATTENTION EVERYONE!
Captain: we have a dragon out of the hatchery, it looked like a black one with white wing tips so stay on the lookout.
Kattie: STELLAR! That was cam!
Stellar: what?! Let’s go tell captain!
Kattie: NO! we can’t
Stellar: w-why not
Micheal: hey girls where’s cam I still have to do a DNA test on her?!
Captain: STELLAR, MARK, KATTIE! Come to my office please.
Stellar: yes sir, Mark: coming sir, Kattie: coming
Captain: thank you for coming. The reason I called you here is because we need to find that dragon, I am only going to send only you three to go after cam, me Michael, Bentson, luna, skittles and semi will be waiting for you when your back here in the hatchery.
Stellar: yes sir, Mark: okay sir, Kattie: Okey Dokey
Captain: Oh, and stellar here take the walkie talkie, Cori will stay connected with you.
Stellar: okay thank you
Cori: stellar hey, this’ll be easy because Michael put a tracker in her so I can just track her down.
Stellar: great oh and thank you Michael.
Micheal: no problem.
Stellar: um captain there’s four realms, but you’re only sending three of us.
Captain: yes, you're correct but you only need to go through three, earth, water, and fire
Stellar: what about ice??? IS THE ICE REALM OKAY!
Captain: “chuckles” the ice realm is fine, but the fire realm or fire dragons in general are mean the only dragons they let come in and out are fire and sometimes ice sense ice is more powerful fire respects them so that’s why I only sent you three
Stellar: oh, I see
Captain: but you guys should find cam ASAP
Stellar: yes sir!
Author: “Stellar Katie and Mark go get supplies to get ready to go on the journey to go get cam”
TO BE CONTINUED
Stellar: all right I'm ready, captain we're going to go find cam now
Captain: ok, be safe
OUTSIDE THE HATCHERY; IN EARTH REALM
Stellar: Mark, Kattie lets combine our rope to get a cross
Queen earth dragon: who must disturb me at this hour, oh! delightful we have guests or humans. Um? How may I greet you? Maybe some flower spaghetti or worm salad?
Stellar: Um? That’s okay we actually aren’t hungry. But where are looking for a dragon.
Queen earth dragon: oh, I see, well we saw a young black dragon.
Stellar YES! did you see where it went?
Queen earth dragon: yes, water realm
Stellar: Okay thankyou
Kattie: stellar, mark can you believe it, cam is right under our fingertips.
Stellar: yeah, I know, mark has Cori been in touch lately?
Mark: yes, he said no sign of cam, but I have a feeling he’s not looking
Kattie: what a meanie
Stellar: tell me about it, well lets get there before cam gets to fire realm
Kattie: that would be bad!
Mark: yes it would be
At water realm
Stellar: CAM!!! CAAAAAAM!!! UGH she can’t hear me.
Water dragon guard: Hey no HUMANS allowed.
Kattie: please, our friend is in there!
Water dragon guard: I'm sorry, but rules are rules. Humans are not allowed in here. You can't just come barging in here looking for your friend.
Stellar: But Cam is in danger! We need to find her before she gets to the fire realm.
Water dragon guard: Fine, I will let you in but you have to be quick and remain hidden.
Stellar: Thank you!
Inside the water realm, they finally found Cam but she was surrounded by a group of water dragons.
Stellar: Cam! We're here to rescue you!
Cam: Stellar, Kattie, Mark! Thank goodness you're here.
Together, they were able to defeat the water dragons and escape back to the hatchery.
Captain: I'm glad you were able to find Cam and bring her safely back. Good job, team.
Stellar: Thank you, sir. We couldn't have done it without each other.
And so, the adventure of Stellar, Kattie, and Mark continued as they faced more challenges and dangers in the realm of dragons. Their bond growing stronger with each passing day.
TO BE CONTINUED...