can you rewrite this better
In the bustling city of Seoul, two K-pop idols found themselves entwined in a love that had to be kept hidden from the world. SKZ I.N, a member of the popular boy group Stray Kids, and Blackpink's Eunji, a talented singer and dancer, had fallen for each other against all odds. Their love was a secret, a forbidden romance that could never be revealed to their overprotective fans.
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Eunji and her members were all practicing their new song, "Pink Venom+Shut Down" They was going to perform at the MMA tonight and they had to do their best. Eunji was eager to see I.N and his group performance as much as her members did too.
As the song ended, the girls all went upstairs to get dress.
(Eunji outfit)
When the girls finished getting dress, they all met up downstairs. Lisa was the first, then Jennie, then Jisoo, then Rosie, then Eunji.
They all began admiring each other outfits, before exiting YG building.
{MMA}
(I know that YG Idols can't go to MMA anymore due to that incident back then, but just pretend that YG Idols can)
When they reached MMA building, the girls quickly made their way inside. "Just this way,girls" their bodyguards announced.
The girls all follows their bodyguards into the MMA makeup room. "Oh my god! Hi! When I heard that I was doing on the makeup of Blackpink, I was in shock. I'm such an huge fan of you guys," their makeup artist says.
The girls smiles, "So, what song are you guys performing? Pretty Savage? How You Like That? Or your new album," the girl asked.
"Well... we did considered performing Pretty Savage and How You Like That, BUT... We performing our new album - Pink Venom + Shut Down," Eunji replies.
The makeup artist smiles, "Those two will be a hit! I'm sure you guys might win the award," she says.
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The girls look in the mirror, "You did an amazing job," Jennie announced. Their makeup artist smiles, "I did my best," she says.
They made their way out of the room while bowing down, and entered the Main room in Main room. After finding seats, they sat down and waited for their announcement to perform.
They observed as Ateez performed Bouncy, and Eunji couldn't admit that it was amazing.
After their performance, it was SKZ turn.
Now, it was Eunji and her members turn. As they walked on stage, all idols began to become curious on what song they was going to perform.
(In pink venom she'll sing"This That pink venom this that pink venom... Straight Dome like woah woah, Straight to your dome like Ah Ah ah... Get Em Em Em" She'll sing the last chorus of the song. And in shut down, she'll rap Lisa part... she'll sing "Stay in your own lane cause I'm about to swerve catch me when you hear my Lamborghini go vroom vroom vroom" and the last chorus of the song"Shut it down (Blackpink in your area) Shut it down what what what... Shut it down(Blackpink In Your Area) "
Eunji fixes her hair as she watched her members exit the stage. She was going to perform a cover song, and she had to do her best.
As the bright lights of Seoul illuminated the bustling city, two K-pop idols found themselves intertwined in a love that had to be kept hidden from the world. SKZ I.N, a member of the popular boy group Stray Kids, and Blackpink's Eunji, a talented singer and dancer, had fallen for each other against all odds. Their love was a secret, a forbidden romance that could never be revealed to their overprotective fans.
Amidst the excitement of preparing for their performance at the MMA, Eunji and her members practiced their new song, "Pink Venom + Shut Down". Eager to see I.N and his group perform, the anticipation grew among the members of Blackpink.
Once they were all dressed and ready, the girls met downstairs at the YG building, admiring each other's outfits before heading to the MMA. Upon arriving, they were guided by their bodyguards to the makeup room, where they met an enthusiastic makeup artist who was a huge fan of theirs. Eunji shared their plans to perform their new songs, receiving encouragement and support from the makeup artist.
After getting their makeup done, the girls made their way to the main room, taking their seats and watching other performances. As Ateez performed, Eunji couldn't help but be impressed by their talent.
Finally, it was time for Blackpink to take the stage. Eunji and her members walked out to perform a powerful rendition of "Pink Venom + Shut Down", with Eunji showcasing her skills by singing and rapping different parts of the songs. As she fixed her hair and watched her members exit the stage, Eunji prepared herself for a cover song performance, determined to give it her all.