Re-read "Dear Jordan" poem from The Crossover.
Write a letter making a request of someone you have a relationship with using the same verse style as “Dear Jordan.” Your letter should do all of the following:
Identify your relationship with the person you are writing to.
Identify what you are asking of this person.
Identify the emotion you feel toward the person you are writing to.
Include at least 12–15 lines.
Grading Criteria: EFFORT and COMPLETION
Consider adding:
2 similes ("like two starts")
1 sight imagery ("burning up")
1 symbol ("stealing sun")
1 purposeful slang ("slash with me")
1 purposeful grammar mistake ("i am empty")
Dear Mom,
You are my guiding light, my rock,
The one who's always there for me, around the clock.
So, I'm writing this letter to make a humble plea,
To ask for your support, if you'll grant it to me.
I'm asking for your understanding and trust,
To let me spread my wings, like a bird about to bust.
I want to chase my dreams, explore the unknown,
And know that you'll be there for me, even when I am grown.
The emotion that fills my heart as I write,
Is a deep, profound gratitude, shining so bright.
You've always been my compass, my true north,
And I want you to know, I'll always put you first.
So, let's embark on this journey, you and me,
Like two stars, shining brightly in a vast, endless sea.
We'll face the challenges together, hand in hand,
Stealing sun from the sky, painting our own brand.
I know I might make mistakes along the way,
But please have faith in me, don't let doubt stray.
I promise to give my all, and slash with you,
In this beautiful dance of life, so brand new.
And when I stumble, as I'm sure I will,
Know that your love is the balm that will heal.
I might feel empty at times, but your love will fill,
Every crack and crevice, with a warmth that's so real.
Thank you, dear Mom, for everything you do,
For being the anchor in my life, so true.
I ask for your love and support, Mom, can you see?
I'm ready to spread my wings, and I know you'll be with me.
With all my love,
[Your Name]
can u make it smaller pls
Dear Friend,
I hope this letter finds you well,
As we share a bond that words can't tell.
I'm reaching out with a request, my dear,
To lend your support, have no fear.
I'm asking for a little bit of your time,
To listen to my thoughts, just a dime.
The emotion I feel towards you is trust,
For you've always been reliable and just.
Like two puzzle pieces, fitting so snug,
Our friendship is a treasure, like a hidden rug.
So, I'm asking you to be by my side,
As I navigate this journey, with strides.
I might stumble and fall now and then,
But with your friendship, I'll rise again.
I know I might seem a bit lost and empty,
But your presence fills me, gently.
Let's explore the world, hand in hand,
Like two adventurers, exploring sand.
I ask for your companionship on this quest,
Knowing that together, we are blessed.
Thank you, dear friend, for being there,
For showing me love and showing you care.
I ask for your support, for guidance too,
Because with you, anything I can do.
With love and gratitude,
[Your Name]
smaller pls
Dear Friend,
I need your help, if you would,
To lighten my burden, if you could.
Our bond is strong, like a sturdy wall,
And I know you'll catch me if I fall.
I'm asking for a favor, my dear,
To lend a listening ear, so clear.
The emotion I feel is deep, so true,
A sense of trust, only felt with you.
Just a little bit of your precious time,
To hear me out, as I climb.
I may feel lost and a bit empty,
But your presence fills me, gently.
Together, let's explore the unknown,
Like kindred spirits, never alone.
I ask for your guidance on this quest,
Knowing that with you, I'm truly blessed.
Thank you, dear friend, for your care,
For always being there, and being fair.
I ask for your support, a simple ask,
For with you by my side, I can conquer any task.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
put it together and make it 12 lines but really small
Dear Friend,
I need your help, if you would,
To lighten my burden, if you could.
Our bond is strong, like a sturdy wall,
And I know you'll catch me if I fall.
Just a little bit of your precious time,
To hear me out, as I climb.
I may feel lost and a bit empty,
But your presence fills me, gently.
Together, let's explore the unknown,
Like kindred spirits, never alone.
I ask for your guidance on this quest,
Knowing that with you, I'm truly blessed.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]