The revolution in Animal Farm cannot be considered successful. Despite the initial ideals of equality and freedom for all animals, the pigs, who led the revolution, gradually betrayed these principles. The Seven Commandments, symbolizing the original goals of the revolution, were altered over time to suit the pigs' interests, as seen when only one commandment remained, emphasizing the inequality among animals. The pigs' adoption of human habits, such as carrying whips, wearing clothes, and socializing with humans, demonstrates a deviation from the revolutionary ideals. Even the renaming of the farm from "Animal Farm" to "The Manor Farm" underscores the failure of the revolution. The text reveals the disillusionment of the animals as they witness the pigs becoming indistinguishable from the humans they initially rebelled against. In essence, the revolution failed as it led to a mere change in leadership, with the oppressed becoming the oppressors, and the promised equality replaced by tyranny. rephrase as a 9th grader and shorten up a bit
The revolution in Animal Farm wasn't successful. The pigs, who led the revolution, betrayed the original ideals of equality and freedom. They changed the Seven Commandments to benefit themselves, adopting human habits and even renaming the farm. The animals became disillusioned as the pigs became just like the humans they fought against. In the end, the revolution only brought a change in leadership, with the animals becoming oppressed again.
