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Cocconut oil. Trendy. But healthy? Americans (72%) think so. Experts say not so fast: lots of fat, lots of calories, not enough proof of benefits.
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Coconut oil is trendy, but is it healthy? While 72% of Americans think it’s better for you than other oils, nutritionists disagree. They say more research is needed to determine if the oil provides enough benefits to balance out its high fat and calorie content.
Coconut oil is trendy right now, but maybe it isn’t as healthy as 72% of Americans think. Experts think coconut oil has lots of fat and lots of calories, and there isn’t proof of benefits.
72% of Americans think coconut oil is healthy. Experts aren’t in that group, saying the trendy oil has fat and calories.
Most Americans think coconut oil is healthy, but experts say it is bad for you because its high in fat and calories.