I could feel the heat from the pavement through the thin rubber soles of my%0D%0Asneakers. I hoped we could finish delivering these flyers before the temperature%0D%0Arose any higher. I looked at the enormous stack of flyers remaining in Jeff's hands.%0D%0A"How much longer will this take?" I asked, but Jeff shrugged and replied, "No idea,%0D%0APaula."%0D%0A%0D%0AHow would the story likely be different if Jeff were telling it?%0D%0AIt would not tell why they were delivering flyers.%0D%0AIt would not provide Paula's thoughts and feelings.%0D%0AIt would not describe how Jeff reacts to Paula.
If Jeff were telling the story, it is likely that the focus would shift from Paula's thoughts and feelings to Jeff's own perspective. The story may provide more information about Jeff's thoughts on the task of delivering flyers, his feelings about the heat from the pavement, and his own reaction to Paula's question. The reasons for delivering the flyers may still be mentioned, but Jeff may not dwell on them as much as Paula did in the original version.
