Fix grammar and spelling mistakes........ Don't chante what Gevin says
It was a bright sunny day and we were playing in the playroom (attic of our grandmother's house) when I lost my pretty new earrings and bracelet. I told my older brother Themnoer. My 11-year-old brother heard me telling Themnoer and he climbed up on a chest and said, "We all need to find Nela's earrings and bracelet. We need to look for it. We will find it..." I giggled. He stopped and looked at me, then added, "It's not because we are searching, but because we are looking." This caught everyone's attention, and they all burst into laughter.
"You talk too much, Gevin. So much so that you don't know what you're saying. Please consider that there is really no difference between the words 'searching' and 'looking'," Themnoer said. We then could hear grandmother coming up the stairs, I frowned when the door opened and grandma came in " to get your things it is time to go home" she said "I will clean up and look when I find them I will send Then to your uncle's place.
It was a bright, sunny day, and we were playing in the playroom (attic of our grandmother's house) when I lost my pretty new earrings and bracelet. I told my older brother, Themnoer. My 11-year-old brother heard me telling Themnoer, and he climbed up on a chest and said, "We all need to find Nela's earrings and bracelet. We need to look for it. We will find it..." I giggled. He stopped and looked at me, then added, "It's not because we are searching, but because we are looking." This caught everyone's attention, and they all burst into laughter.
"You talk too much, Gevin. So much so that you don't know what you're saying. Please consider that there is really no difference between the words 'searching' and 'looking'," Themnoer said. We then heard grandmother coming up the stairs. I frowned when the door opened and Grandma came in to get our things. "It is time to go home," she said. "I will clean up and look. When I find them, I will send Themnoer to your uncle's place.