After becoming registered voters, many people have exercised their right to vote, voted in every election.

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Unit 9 Exit Ticket

1. After becoming registered voters, many people have exercised their right to vote in every election.
2. Change the comma to a semicolon
3. He saw Marta and hesitantly tossed his basketball to her.
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After registering to vote, many individuals have exercised their right to vote, participating in every election.

1. After becoming registered voters, many people have exercised their right to vote in every election;.

2. (No changes needed) Correct as it is.
3. He saw Marta and hesitantly tossed his basketball to her. (No changes needed) Correct as it is.