can you change this up a bit

The reasoning supporting the claim is flawed. Although studies show higher fines reduce speeding, doubling fines does not guarantee improved safety. The argument assumes all can afford larger fines, overlooking potential consequences such as resentment among offenders.

The claim's reasoning is flawed as it fails to consider certain aspects. While it is true that studies demonstrate a reduction in speeding when fines are increased, it cannot be assumed that doubling fines will automatically lead to improved safety. This argument overlooks the fact that not everyone may have the financial means to afford higher fines and fails to acknowledge the potential negative consequences, including a potential build-up of resentment among offenders.