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"I believe that dress codes should be permanently stopped in schools. Dress codes restrict students' freedom of expression and can be unfair and (treating certain groups of people unfairly). For instance, some dress codes specifically target female students by controlling the length of their skirts or the straps on their tops. This sets a double standard and can lead to body (making someone feel guilty and embarrassed) and (state of not being safe/source of mental worry) among young girls. Also, enforcing dress codes takes away valuable instructional time from teachers and disrupts the learning conditions. Instead of focusing on educating students, teachers are forced to police their clothing and enforce random rules. However, a counterclaim could be made that dress codes are important for maintaining a professional atmosphere and preparing students for future workplaces. While this argument holds some (something is truly what it claims to be), it is important to note that schools can still (help increase/show in a good way) (acting maturely and honestly while doing an excellent job) without putting into use strict and (serving to severely limit or control) dress codes. Students should be allowed to express themselves through their clothing choices, as long as they are within reasonable edges/borders. In end/end result, dress codes in schools should be permanently stopped in order to (help) develop a more (including everything) and accepting (surrounding conditions), while still (helping increase/showing in a good way) the right/the proper level of (acting maturely and honestly while doing an excellent job)."