In "The Train Ride" Paloma needs a better transition between the fourth paragraph (sentences 9 and 10) and the fifth paragraph (sentences 11–14). Which sentence should replace sentence 11 to improve this transition?
Without more context, it is difficult to determine the best replacement for sentence 11 in order to improve the transition between the fourth and fifth paragraphs of "The Train Ride." Additional information or the specific content of the surrounding sentences would be needed to make a proper suggestion.
