(1) The Statue of Liberty is a renowned symbol of American patriotism throughout the world (Panati, Charles p.291). (2) This statue stands 152 feet tall on top of an 89 foot granite pedestal in New York Harbor. (3) It stands on Liberty Island, formerly called Bedloe's Island. (4) When people are in the harbor, they are near this marvelous symbol of liberty. (5) I saw this statue and will never forget it. (6) What they may not know is that creating the statue took many years and effort to complete.
Which sentence in the first paragraph should be removed because it does not relate to the main idea?
A.
sentence 2 This statue stands 152 feet tall on top of an 89 foot granite pedestal in New York Harbor.
B.
sentence 3 It stands on Liberty Island, formerly called Bedloe's Island.
C.
sentence 4 When people are in the harbor, they are near this marvelous symbol of liberty
D.
sentence 5 saw this statue and will never forget it.
D. sentence 5 I saw this statue and will never forget it.
Read the following sentence from the passage "A Gift of Admiration."
What they may not know is that creating the statue took many years and effort to complete.
How should the sentence be revised to create a more formal tone?
A.
To many the creation of the statue was not known because it took many years and much effort to complete.
B.
What many do not know, is that creating the statue took many years and much effort to complete.
C.
Not known by them, is that the creation of the statue took lots of years and much effort to complete.
D.
Creating the statue, many do not know that it took many years and much effort to complete.
B.
What many do not know, is that creating the statue took many years and much effort to complete.
are you sure
Yes, I am sure. Option B is the most appropriate revision to create a more formal tone. It maintains the structure of the original sentence while using more formal language and phrasing.
A student is writing a report and wants to edit it to make better transitions among the paragraphs. Read the students report and answer the question that follows.
President Abraham Lincoln delivered the Gettysburg Address in 1863 at the dedication of the Soldiers' National Cemetery in Pennsylvania. The first speaker at the dedication, Edward Everett, orated for more than two hours. President Lincoln spoke after him, and his speech lasted little more than two minutes. Afterward, Everett told Lincoln that he wished he could express in two hours what Lincoln had said in two minutes.
Lincoln had delivered one of the most memorable speeches in history. This was fitting, as over 50,000 soldiers had died at the Battle of Gettysburg, a turning point in the Civil War. Lincoln's speech focused on a "new birth of freedom" in the United States, as he invoked the Declaration of Independence and its principles of liberty and equality. He stated clearly the need for the nation to be both united and free.
The oldest copies of the speech are different from one another. The Library of Congress has two copies, and the others were recorded by Lincoln well after the speech. One copy was made for Everett, but "Bancroft" and "Bliss" versions also exist. The "Bliss" version is carved into a wall of the Lincoln Memorial in our nation's capital.
Choose the sentence that provides the BEST transition between paragraphs 2 and 3.
A.
It is not exactly certain which words Lincoln spoke that day.
B.
The spirit of Lincoln's speech is remembered well today.
C.
Lincoln was certain about his vision for the course of the nation.
D.
Lincoln's speech had surprised the crowd.