Everyone is excited for the pep rally Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing out the balloons, police favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely pole or it won't float on the other side of the gym and Sam is practicing the cheer routine if she doesn't practice, you could embarrass yourself the last to arrive at Brian and Avery with the shirts to give away as long as everybody dies. Her part of the Pam probably will be exercise, revise the following paragraph of correct pronoun agreement.
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing out the balloons, police favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely pole or it will not float on the other side of the gym. Sam is practicing the cheer routine. If she does not practice, she could embarrass herself. The last to arrive are Brian and Avery with the shirts to give away as long as everybody dies. Their part of the Pam probably will be exercise.
Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing out the balloons, which is their favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely full or they won't float on the other side of the gym. Sam is practicing the cheer routine because if she doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself. The last to arrive are Brian and Avery, who have the shirts to give away as long as everybody likes them. Her part of the plan is probably to organize the exercise routine.
In order to revise the paragraph for correct pronoun agreement, we need to identify any pronouns that may be used incorrectly. Let's examine the original paragraph:
"Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing out the balloons, police favorite task. They hate how the balloons have to be completely pole or it won't float on the other side of the gym, and Sam is practicing the cheer routine. If she doesn't practice, you could embarrass yourself. The last to arrive are Brian and Avery with the shirts to give away, as long as everybody dies. Her part of the Pam probably will be exercise."
Now, let's go through each sentence and revise it for correct pronoun agreement:
1. "Everyone is excited for the pep rally." - This sentence is correct as it is.
2. "Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing out the balloons, police favorite task." - It seems there is an error in this sentence. It is unclear who "police" refers to. Let's assume it was supposed to say "their favorite task" instead. The revised sentence would be: "Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing out the balloons, their favorite task."
3. "They hate how the balloons have to be completely pole or it won't float on the other side of the gym." - Here, it is unclear who "they" refers to. It appears to refer to Katie and Jill, but it is not explicitly stated. Let's revise it to specify: "Katie and Jill hate how the balloons have to be completely full or they won't float on the other side of the gym."
4. "And Sam is practicing the cheer routine." - This sentence is correct as it is.
5. "If she doesn't practice, you could embarrass yourself." - It is unclear who "she" and "you" refer to. Since the sentence mentions Sam practicing, let's assume "she" refers to Sam and "you" refers to the person reading the paragraph. The revised sentence would be: "If Sam doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself, and if you don't practice, you could embarrass yourself."
6. "The last to arrive are Brian and Avery with the shirts to give away, as long as everybody dies." - It seems there is an error in this sentence. It is unclear what is meant by "as long as everybody dies." Let's assume it was supposed to say "as long as everybody gets a shirt" instead. The revised sentence would be: "The last to arrive are Brian and Avery with the shirts to give away, as long as everybody gets a shirt."
7. "Her part of the Pam probably will be exercise." - This sentence is unclear and contains a pronoun, "her," without a clear antecedent. It is unclear who "her" refers to and what is meant by "the Pam." Let's assume it was supposed to say "Her part of the program" instead. The revised sentence would be: "Her part of the program will probably be exercise."
After making these revisions, the paragraph would look like this:
"Everyone is excited for the pep rally. Katie and Jill are in charge of blowing out the balloons, their favorite task. Katie and Jill hate how the balloons have to be completely full or they won't float on the other side of the gym. And Sam is practicing the cheer routine. If Sam doesn't practice, she could embarrass herself, and if you don't practice, you could embarrass yourself. The last to arrive are Brian and Avery with the shirts to give away, as long as everybody gets a shirt. Her part of the program will probably be exercise."