Can you make this clear and fix grammar isssues

From this experiment the independent variable (concentration of H2SO4) and dependent variable ((Volume of H2) increasing the level of concentration it effects the rate of reaction of reaction which in this case it is related with volume of gas produced.

In this experiment, the independent variable is the concentration of H2SO4, and the dependent variable is the volume of H2. Increasing the concentration will affect the rate of reaction, which is measured by the volume of gas produced.

To clarify and fix the grammar issues in your statement:

In this experiment, the independent variable is the concentration of H2SO4, while the dependent variable is the volume of H2. By increasing the level of concentration, it affects the rate of reaction, specifically the volume of gas produced.