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The aim of this student experiment is to investigate effect of hydrogen gas production when sulfuric acid concentration with magnesium ribbons. Throughout, the adequate analysis and interpretation, this experiment suggest that when sulfuric acid concentration was increased (0.1M, 0.5M, 0.75M, 1M, and1.5M) result in increase in volume production of hydrogen gas reflecting an increase in rate of reactions.
It was hypothesised that an increase in concentration of sulfuric acid would cause further volume of hydrogen gas hence, creating more rate of reaction. This alternative hypothesis ahs been supported by the results produced.
Nevertheless, due to the significant limitation of experimental method this results in not obtaining error of uncertainty, expected values, and reading of volume of gas, can influence the inconsistencies of the overall result. Notwithstanding, the production of volume of hydrogen and rate of reaction suggest that experiment itself was on track.

The aim of this student experiment is to investigate the effect of sulfuric acid concentration on the production of hydrogen gas with magnesium ribbons. Based on the analysis and interpretation, this experiment suggests that increasing the concentration of sulfuric acid (0.1M, 0.5M, 0.75M, 1M, and 1.5M) results in an increase in the volume of hydrogen gas produced, indicating a higher rate of reaction.

The hypothesis was that increasing the concentration of sulfuric acid would lead to a greater volume of hydrogen gas and a faster rate of reaction. This alternative hypothesis is supported by the results obtained.

However, there are limitations in the experimental method that prevent us from obtaining the uncertainty of the measurements, expected values, and precise readings of gas volume. These limitations may contribute to inconsistencies in the overall results. Nevertheless, the production of hydrogen gas volume and the rate of reaction suggest that the experiment itself was successful.

The aim of this student experiment is to investigate the effect of sulfuric acid concentration on hydrogen gas production using magnesium ribbons. Through adequate analysis and interpretation, this experiment suggests that increasing the sulfuric acid concentration (0.1M, 0.5M, 0.75M, 1M, and 1.5M) results in an increase in hydrogen gas volume production, reflecting an increase in the rate of reactions.

The hypothesis proposed that an increase in sulfuric acid concentration would lead to a higher volume of hydrogen gas and a faster rate of reaction. This alternative hypothesis has been supported by the results obtained.

However, there are significant limitations in the experimental method that prevent obtaining the error of uncertainty, expected values, and accurate readings of gas volume. This can introduce inconsistencies in the overall results. Nevertheless, the observed production of hydrogen volume and rate of reaction suggest that the experiment itself was successful.

To summarize, this student experiment aims to study the relationship between sulfuric acid concentration and hydrogen gas production. The results indicate that increasing the acid concentration leads to higher gas volume and reaction rate. However, limitations in the experimental method can affect the accuracy of the results. Nonetheless, the experiment was deemed successful based on the observed hydrogen production and reaction rate.