The point of view you choose for a story will shape its plot, characters, and theme. Now you will participate in a discussion to determine the point of view you will use. Read part of Jeremy's post.
My story is about two friends, Bo and Tommy, who get stuck in a cabin during a snowstorm and argue about what to do next. I am going to tell my story in third-person omniscient point of view. This way, no one character's argument will be given more sway. Also, I plan to end with a twist, which will be easier to explain with the narrator removed from the action.
Create one original post that:
Briefly describes your story topic, conflict, and characters.
Explains which point of view you think would be best for your story.
Explains how the point of view you choose will affect your story.
Create one response post that:
Offers advice and feedback on a classmate's original post.
Create a second response post that:
Responds to a classmate's feedback on your original post, explaining how their advice feedback has helped you revise your writing plans.
Use the discussion rubric to learn how you will be graded.
Original Post:
My story is about a detective, Sam, investigating a murder case in a small town. The main conflict is discovering who the killer is and bringing them to justice. Sam is a determined and skilled detective, but he also has a troubled past that affects his perspective on the case.
I believe first-person point of view would be best for my story. This way, I can intimately portray Sam's thoughts, emotions, and motives, allowing the readers to truly understand his character. It will also create a sense of mystery since readers will only know what Sam knows, and they will experience the investigation through his eyes.
The first-person point of view will also allow me to delve deeper into Sam's troubled past and how it affects his decisions and interactions during the investigation. The readers will have a personal connection with Sam, which will make the suspense and tension more intense.
Response Post:
I think first-person point of view is a great choice for your story. It will definitely give your readers a closer connection to Sam and make them more invested in his investigation. However, I would suggest considering the limitations of this point of view as well. Since everything will be filtered through Sam's perspective, there may be some details and insights that readers might miss out on. One way to counter this is by adding dialogue and interactions with other characters that reveal different perspectives or information.
Additionally, you could consider using flashbacks or inner monologues to explore Sam's troubled past. This will add depth to his character and provide context for his actions and decisions. Overall, I think first-person point of view will create a strong sense of suspense and mystery, but be mindful of finding ways to incorporate different perspectives to enhance the storytelling.
Revised Post:
Thank you for your feedback! You're absolutely right about the limitations of first-person point of view. I will make sure to include dialogue and interactions with other characters to provide different perspectives and additional information. This will help to create a more well-rounded and engaging story.
I also appreciate your suggestion of using flashbacks and inner monologues to delve into Sam's troubled past. This will allow readers to understand his motivations and how his past shapes his decisions. I think it will add depth to his character and create a more compelling narrative.
Overall, your advice has helped me realize the importance of balance in using first-person point of view. I will make sure to incorporate various storytelling techniques to provide a more enriching reading experience. Thank you again for your insights!
Original Post:
My story revolves around a couple, Sarah and John, who have been married for several years and are dealing with a major disagreement about whether or not to have children. The conflict arises when Sarah expresses her desire to start a family, while John remains firm in his decision to remain childless.
For this story, I believe that the first-person point of view would be the best choice. By using the first-person point of view, I can directly convey the emotions, thoughts, and perspectives of both Sarah and John, allowing the reader to fully understand the depth of their conflict. Additionally, the first-person point of view will enable readers to connect more intimately with the characters, as they will be able to experience their internal struggles and desires firsthand.
The first-person point of view will also enhance the theme of personal growth and self-discovery. As the story progresses, both Sarah and John will undergo significant emotional transformations and self-reflection. Having the story narrated from their individual perspectives will provide a powerful insight into their internal journeys.
Response Post:
I really enjoyed reading your original post and your story idea sounds compelling. The conflict between Sarah and John is relatable and has the potential for emotional depth. I agree with your choice of the first-person point of view. It will allow the readers to truly understand the inner thoughts and feelings of both characters, which is crucial for a story centered around a relationship conflict.
One suggestion I would make is to consider alternating between Sarah and John's perspectives in each chapter or section. This way, readers can get a balanced view of the conflict and see how both characters evolve over time. It could also create a sense of tension and anticipation as readers wonder how their perspectives will clash and if they will eventually find common ground.
Overall, I think your choice of the first-person point of view will bring a strong sense of intimacy and personal connection to your story. Good luck with your writing!
Response to Feedback:
Thank you so much for your feedback! I really appreciate your suggestion to alternate between Sarah and John's perspectives in each chapter. I can see how that would add a dynamic element to the story and keep the readers engaged. It also allows for a more balanced view of the conflict, showcasing both characters' experiences and growth.
I will definitely revise my writing plans to incorporate this suggestion. I believe it will enhance the overall narrative structure and provide a clearer understanding of the conflict and its resolution. Thank you once again for your valuable input. It has definitely helped me refine my story idea.